Sunday, October 17, 2010

Microfiction Monday # 39



Welcome to Microfiction Monday,
where a picture paints 140 characters.

Susan over at Stonyriver hosts Microfiction Monday The rules are simple,to use Susan's picture she posts then compose a story up to 140 characters including spaces and punctuation.

So here is this weeks picture and my story to go with.


Punzel grew tired of her role
 in this fairytale
Playing the hapless blond
 was so yesterday
She craved adventure
and a Big Mac!

Now leap on over to Susan's and leave your name
She even has a brilliant character counter to help us count
As Susan promises, it's fast, it's fiction, it's fun!
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44 comments:

  1. Sylvia KOctober 17, 2010 at 3:51 PM

    Oh, how fun, Peggy!! I love it and now I want a Big Mac, too!!! Hope you're doing well and that you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  2. DianeOctober 17, 2010 at 4:07 PM

    Thanks for the smile. Poor thing! :O)

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  3. PeggyOctober 17, 2010 at 4:08 PM

    Thanks Sylvia;

    Always fun to read your comment.
    I am good. Have a great week too, my friend!

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  4. Michael G-GOctober 17, 2010 at 4:10 PM

    Peggy, this is priceless. Punzel deserves her Big Mac, what with all she has to put up with!

    Have a great week.

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  5. PeggyOctober 17, 2010 at 4:14 PM

    Michael;

    Punzel thanks you from the bottom of her full tummy!

    Have a wonderful evening.

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  6. anthonynorthOctober 17, 2010 at 4:19 PM

    I liked that. Great fun :-)

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  7. Kay L. DaviesOctober 17, 2010 at 4:56 PM

    Cute, Peggy. I like it!!

    Kay, Alberta

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  8. PeggyOctober 17, 2010 at 5:02 PM

    Thanks so much Kay;
    I always have fun with MF .
    Have a great week, my friend.

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  9. PatOctober 17, 2010 at 5:18 PM

    It looks like Punzel has a few super-sized Big Macs on that wooden tray. She'd better go easy on Big Mac consumption so as not to lose her girlish figure.

    I love your take on this weeks MM picture, Peggy!

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  10. PeggyOctober 17, 2010 at 6:10 PM

    Thank you Pat, I think there are super sized Big Mac's on that tray. Maybe she will share!
    Have a great week,and see you next time.

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  11. JaneOctober 17, 2010 at 6:23 PM

    Love it!

    Jane

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  12. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}October 17, 2010 at 6:32 PM

    Punzel should think Wendy's at least. Good one Peggy hope you are doing OK.

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  13. AnonymousOctober 17, 2010 at 7:06 PM

    Oh, I do like the new Punzel, you go girl! A great MM.

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  14. PeggyOctober 17, 2010 at 7:29 PM

    Thanks Jane;
    Have a great week.

    Gospelwriter.

    Sweet commemt, I do like a girl with a plan.
    Have a nice evening!

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  15. PeggyOctober 17, 2010 at 7:31 PM

    Thank Bill;

    I am Ok, thanks so much for your concern.
    : )

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  16. Rinkly RimesOctober 17, 2010 at 8:57 PM

    I can see the King arriving with a tray of Big Macs! He's outside the window!

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  17. Ms.DaisyOctober 17, 2010 at 10:09 PM

    That's a good and funny take on the picture...is it a movie in the making? Love it!



    ~Jean

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  18. KBOctober 17, 2010 at 10:16 PM

    You are so funny but now I feel like eating a Big Mac. Love it!

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  19. PeggyOctober 18, 2010 at 3:41 AM

    KB;

    I think I was hungry when I wrote my story!
    Have a great week and thank you for making me smile.

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  20. PeggyOctober 18, 2010 at 3:45 AM

    Ms Dasey;

    You might be right about the movie version.
    You're so kind!

    Have a great week.


    Rinkly;

    You're right, that is the King with a huge tray of big Mac's.
    Thanks for the great comment.
    Have a wonderful week.

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  21. KayOctober 18, 2010 at 4:22 AM

    Ahhh... so being a beautiful blond yourself, you are able to relate with Punzel, hunh? I wish I could bring a Big Mac over for you. Oh what the heck, go send Kevin!

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  22. PeggyOctober 18, 2010 at 9:07 AM

    Kay;

    Awe sweet. I love my son but I would love to have a Big Mac with you! (we can substitute the meal)
    Loved your rainbow !

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  23. lizziviggiOctober 18, 2010 at 9:18 AM

    It is fun! I like your lighthearted take-- I hope she leapt through the open space and found a McD's nearby!

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  24. SuzOctober 18, 2010 at 9:25 AM

    a girl has to have her big mac ;)

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  25. Ellen BrickleyOctober 18, 2010 at 9:35 AM

    I liked 'Punzel', a nice modern nickname for the kind of girl who likes Big Macs :) Great take on the picture!

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  26. PeggyOctober 18, 2010 at 9:39 AM

    Lizzi;

    I'm glad you liked it,
    Thanks so much for commenting.

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  27. PeggyOctober 18, 2010 at 9:41 AM

    Suz;

    Sometimes fast food just takes the edge off!
    Thanks for coming by this morning.
    Have a nice Fall week.

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  28. PeggyOctober 18, 2010 at 9:42 AM

    Ellen;

    Thank you, Punzel is a strong force, after you feed her well that is;
    See you next time for MF.

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  29. izzyOctober 18, 2010 at 10:13 AM

    How nice it was of you to visit- I always wondered
    what really happened to 'punzel- she must have gotten acess to a time machine!

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  30. Amanda MooreOctober 18, 2010 at 10:55 AM

    Peggy I never no the Microfiction Monday but this was so darn cute I had to tell ya!

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  31. G-ManOctober 18, 2010 at 11:14 AM

    Ha! Loved this one Peggy....G

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  32. UnknownOctober 18, 2010 at 11:19 AM

    HA! You know, sometimes a gal just has to have herself a big mac! Love it!

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  33. AnonymousOctober 18, 2010 at 11:53 AM

    I LOVE the name, Punzel!!! And yes, a Big Mac might just be what the lady needs. I enjoyed this!

    Have a great week. Cheers.

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  34. quillyOctober 18, 2010 at 12:15 PM

    LOL! I love this take. I'd have trouble playing helpless, too -- but no Big Macs for me! Too many calories, too little nutrition.

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  35. Maude LynnOctober 18, 2010 at 12:17 PM

    Go, girl!

    I love your take on the picture!

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  36. septembermomOctober 18, 2010 at 12:21 PM

    That's fun! I could use a Big Mac too. Great job.

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  37. AkelamaluOctober 18, 2010 at 12:39 PM

    She's bored for sure! LOL

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  38. RigelOctober 18, 2010 at 1:15 PM

    Darn. Now I need a Big Mac, too. Haha. Loved it!

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  39. PeggyOctober 18, 2010 at 1:47 PM

    Septembermom;

    Thank you so much for coming by today.

    Thank you Mama Zen;

    I sure enjoyed writing it.

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  40. PeggyOctober 18, 2010 at 1:55 PM

    Thanks Gman;

    5thsister;
    Sometimes we just have to eat fast food.
    Thanks for coming by.

    Rigel;
    I'm glad you liked it.
    Thanks for coming by.

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  41. AnonymousOctober 18, 2010 at 2:02 PM

    I like your original take, what a progressive lady Punzel sounds! :O)

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  42. Susan FobesOctober 18, 2010 at 5:46 PM

    This is certainly my type of damsel in distress!

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  43. AnonymousOctober 18, 2010 at 7:09 PM

    haha! great story!

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  44. hopeOctober 20, 2010 at 5:04 PM

    Man, Blogger should've eaten a Big Mac and left my comments alone!

    Once more.

    You and I were on the same wave length, although your name was kinder. This one made me laugh..hard! Thank you!

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