Sunday, March 7, 2010

Microfiction Monday #15



Welcome to Microfiction Monday,
where a picture paints 140 characters.
Susan over at Stonyriver hosts Microfiction Monday.

Here's this week's picture, and my story to go with it:



Clark stop staring at my boobs begged Rita
I think that's Mr DeMille in the pool
This could be my big break,
I need to look available



The rules are simple,to use Susan's picture she posts then compose a story up to 140 characters including spaces and punctuation.
Then hop on over to Susan's and leave your name. She even has a brilliant character counter to help us count.
As Susan promises, it's fast, it's fiction, it's fun!

37 comments:

  1. Oh, great one, Peggy! Ah, that Clark did love the ladies!! What a hoot! Hope you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  2. Oh Peggy -- genuine historical fiction in so few words, this is great! (I think I see Mary Pickford about to swim by LOL)

    I hope Rita gets her big break!

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  3. Sylvia;

    Thanks Sylvia, another great picture. I don't think Clark and Rita ever got together in the end!
    Have awonderful evening.

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  4. Oh that Slutty Rita LOL Too funny. I love it :)

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  5. Susan;

    Thank you, the lady looks a little like Mary Pickford . I think Rita got her man Frank.
    These are so much fun.
    Have a great week.

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  6. Thom;

    She was a bit slutty, wasn't she?
    Thanks Thom, have agood week!

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  7. This was good, I hope that Carole Lombard wasn't too Jealous, or was she messing around with Orson? Loved it Peggy.

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  8. Poor Rita. DeMille never noticed her and Clark turned his attentions on a less ambitious girl.

    Fun story. Thanks for letting me add my two cents ...

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  9. Thanks Bill;

    Orson Well, could be! But Clark only had eyes for Carole.
    Thanks Bill, yyou know these people too! YAY

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  10. Fits right in with the academy awards tonight!

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  11. Well timed fiction since the Academy Awards were last night.

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  12. Good job! Although I think Clark is staring at her vaccination scar...

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  13. Look available indeed.
    Great take, Peggy.

    Have you a great week!

    hugs
    shakira

    YOU WERE THAT EXCITED?

    WE'RE GONNA HOLO-HOLO

    CIRCLE OF LIFE

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  14. Quilly;

    and I know who you're talking about, add away my friend!
    Thanks for your comment, have a great week!

    Mountain; nmama;

    Thank you, that was my first thought because of the Bettie Boop look on the lady! Se yu next week!

    Bagman and Butler;

    Thank you, so nice to have you with us on this fun meme. Have a great week and hope to see you here next time.

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  15. Jabblog;

    Thank you,I had fun!

    SouthL;akesMom:

    I think you're right about Clark, he probably is looking elsewhere
    Have a great week! Maybe spring is springing!

    Shakira;

    The little tramp, both of them!
    Have to get over and read yours!
    Have a great week!

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  16. A look back, but timely all the same...terrific!

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  17. Thanks Christopher;

    I appreciate the great comment!
    Have a wonderful evening!

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  18. ah, the good old days... or maybe not so good. great take, peggy, i loved it.

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  19. juliana;

    This is fun,and I have gotten to visit so many great blogs including yours.
    Thank you for your great comment.
    Have a great evening!

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  20. That's too funny!

    Poor men! Blinded by boobs. ;)

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  21. Hope;

    You are so funny and accurate!
    Hope you had a good weekend!

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  22. Cool blending of film stars with fiction. Neat story.

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  23. An Eerie Tapestry;

    Thank you and thank you for coming by! I have s lot of fun going to the different blogs and reading their stories! Until the next time!

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  24. Enjoyed your take on the picture, Peggy!

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  25. Aw this was such a true take on the picture. I could see this scene in a movie :)

    JM

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  26. Thank you Sylvia,
    I so enjoy reading them all.
    It's a nice way to start the week!

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  27. Peggy, this brought a smile to my face. I always look forward to seeing what you write on Mondays. I always come away with a smile or a chuckle.

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  30. Jillien;

    Thank you so much, first thing that came to mind. Sometimes that's good and sometimes not!
    Have a great evening!

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  31. Cheryl;

    ...and I always look forward to your wonderful supportive comments.
    Thank you so much.
    Have a great great week!

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  32. Poor Clark, innocently looking at boobs while she's off eying Mr. DeMille

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  33. I know, I feel for the poor guy too.
    Rita seems to control this relationship.
    Thanks for your great story addition!
    Have a good evening!

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  34. Oh thats funny Peggy and clearly more than likely so true, lol. My eyes cant get over that photo of the flower on the left, wow, thats amazing.

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  35. love your Microfiction for Monday Peggy and thanks for stopping by for my three word Wednesday I appreciate your comments always have. I have something for you to read just follow the link below,


    Night Moves


    Thanks Larry.

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