Sunday, November 21, 2010

Microfiction Monday # 43

Welcome to Microfiction Monday




Where a picture paints 140 characters.

Susan over at Stonyriver hosts Microfiction Monday The rules are simple,to use Susan's picture she posts then compose a story up to 140 characters including spaces and punctuation.

So here is this weeks picture and my story to go with.



The last thing I remember said Barney
was drinking beside a cool stream
THEN BAM
Next thing I know I woke up here
Help me,
ANYBODY!

Now leap on over to Susan's and leave your
She even has a brilliant character counter to help us count
As Susan promises, it's fast, it's fiction, it's fun!

36 comments:

  1. Ah, poor guy! I know just how he feels! So sorry you've had the flu! No fun at all! Fortunately, my Shingles responded quickly to the cream the Dr. prescribed and disappeared in two days -- no return so far!! I love your beautiful fall header! Terrific! Take care, my friend! Hope your week goes well!

    Sylvia

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  2. So glad to hear that your shingles are gone! They are so painful I hear! Take special care of you!

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  3. I guess he didn't consider receiving a school T-shirt and hat as helpful. Good one, Peggy.

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  4. I can understand as that hat is SO unflattering. :)

    Have a good week and Happy Turkey day!

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  5. Pat;

    Probably not!
    Happy Thanksgiving My friend.

    Hope;

    Happy Turkey Day to you too!

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  6. Hehehe! Makes me wonder what was in he water he drank, ;)

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  7. Nice one, Peggy. I felt sorry for the little dear, er, deer, too.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  8. EG;

    I wonder too, thanks for coming by.
    Have a nice week!

    Kay;

    I felt sorry too, love their faces.
    So sweet.
    Have a nice week ahead Kay.

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  9. Well, just hard luck, you're stuck! Great take, Peggy Ma'am.

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  10. Poor Barney! And what a place to end up in.

    Have a great week, Peggy--hope you're over the flu. Happy Thanksgiving!

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  11. Kaykuala;

    What a pretty name.
    Thank you so much for your comment.

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  12. Oh no, Barney how terrible for you! If only you'd ended up in a hunting lodge over the fireplace...any where...else. Have a wonderful turkey day!



    ~Jean

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  13. Thanks Michael;

    I better be better by Turkey Day.
    At least well enough to cook.
    Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.

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  14. You gave your deer a name, and Barney! LOL! Great take.

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  15. I'm smiling, Peggy! Poor Barney. I am glad he could wake up in this present state. Here is hoping for him to get help. :)
    ..

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  16. Great story. Original and funny. Well done!

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  17. Jim;

    Barney thanks you and i thank you too. Have a wonderful Holiday.

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  18. Susan;

    Thank you, I thought he looked like a Barney. Have a wonderful Holiday.

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  19. So the hat probably isn't big as a trophy for him?

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  20. Oh dear! Now that's sad... Glad he can still talk though.

    Hope you are both feeling better and better. No fun to be sick! I can't seem to shake my cold either.

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  21. Well, they're keeping him warm after the shock, I guess.
    Nice one.

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  22. Oh, poor Barney! His dilemma reminds me of some kids I knew in college. :) Clever take.

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  23. Yeah- and to end up in a high school hallway- yikes!

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  24. That's what happens when you drink without proper situational awareness!

    Well done.

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  25. Crikey that must have been a shock! LOL

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  26. BAM is right
    good one
    I like the name Barney

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  27. Awh bless! I feel quite moved, truly. I can quite empathise.

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  28. Thanks so much Madeleine.
    Loved that you were moved.
    Have a great week.

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  29. Mom;

    Well said,always be aware of your surroundings.
    Have a wonderful week.

    Diane;

    Poor Barney!
    Bam!
    Have a wonderful week.

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  30. Hi Peggy,

    You actually had me feeling sorry for Barney.

    The poor guy is in a no-win situation, no matter what the tag-line really.

    Yvonne

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  31. Yikes! Poor guy...just minding his own business and then this happens...Have a wonderful Thanksgiving!

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  32. Poor thing! Tell him sorry for me. :O)

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  33. Poor Barney, I wonder if he is anyhow related to Dan.

    You have a great Thanksgiving Peggy, you deserve it.

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  34. Waking up there is an eye opener! Good job :)

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