Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Microfiction Monday # 36


Welcome to Microfiction Monday,
where a picture paints 140 characters.


Susan over at Stonyriver hosts Microfiction Monday The rules are simple,to use Susan's picture she posts then compose a story up to 140 characters including spaces and punctuation.

So here is this weeks picture and my story to go with.



Didn't Little Stevie Wonder sound good on the radio, Lolly?
I got to get you home early.
Seems like I've waited my whole life to marry you!


Now leap on over to Susan's and leave your name. She even has a brilliant
character counter to help us count.
As Susan promises, it's fast, it's fiction, it's fun!

36 comments:

  1. Sounds like Lolly and her pal are travelers-- time travelers, that is! Stevie Wonder didn't debut his first record until 1961. LOL! And was the Time Machine on the blinky? I'm just guessing that's why the man has his shoes off--> He and Lolly had to walk their trip and now his dogs are barking! LOL!

    Just funning with you, Peggy! Clever tale indeed!

    SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

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  2. Come to think of it, my two mM characters must be time travlers, too. I don't think people were yet with the Dr. Scholl's gel, waay way back. Then, again, "gellin'" probably has a whole assortment of meanings (a-hem), if you let your mind have at it. LOL!

    I think I'd better quit while I'm ahead.

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  3. I like that! They're both so lucky!

    I owe you the biggest Thank You, Peggy -- I'll post about it tomorrow with a few photos to explain. I hope you laugh too!

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  4. This was good Peggy, you are good at these also. Laugh at Sparkle, always fun to read her comments. Our Susan cooked up a Winner this week.

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  5. Love how you incorporated the time frame into it. Great job! :O)

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  6. Sparkle;

    I'm sorry if you thought my story was before 1961. I didn't do a very good job of explaining that the Stevie Wonder reference. Time travelors works for me though. Thanks for stopping by and giving me a laugh. Have a nice week.

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  7. Thanks Diane;

    That's what I meant to do, glad you got it.
    Hope you have a great week and see you next time.

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  8. Love the Stevie Wonder take on the picture this week! And the comments others are making about your post...very funny!
    Have a great week...Cheers!

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  9. Bill;

    Our Susan is really good at picking pictures.
    I know we have fun. :)

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  10. Thanks Susan;

    I've had computer problems all week Lost everything on my laptop. Still not up and running there.
    I'll be over tomorrow to read your post, God willing and the creek don't rise...or however it goes.

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  11. Greyscale;

    It sure seems to be in the air.
    Have a good week.

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  12. Nicely told.

    I'm skipping this week but I'll be back next time. Have a good week.

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  13. Aww, this is lovely. Made me smile.

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  14. Thanks Hope;

    I will miss you but am looking forward to next week.
    Have a good Monday!

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  15. Thanks KB;

    Such a nice comment.
    Have a nice week ahead.

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  16. I love seeing Little Stevie Wonder and Little Michael Jackson on the TV at the Silver Diner and embarrassing the heck out of my kids as I sing alone with them! Thanks for the memory of that, Peggy!

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  17. Don't you worry about that time travel thing. My grandpa was still pulling a horse drawn hay wagon way into the 70's. Your story is just fine and quite romantic just the way it is.

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  18. A true love story. Excellent take on the photo. :) Have a wonderful week ahead :)

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  19. Love is all around us today. What a lovely microfiction, and genius to bring in Stevie Wonder.

    Have a great week x

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  20. Marriage was my theme too this week :)

    Nice one.

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  21. Well done, Peggy - love - or something - is in the air ;-)

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  22. Oh, so sweet. He'd better get Lolly home early to stay in her dad's good graces!

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  23. This was so great!

    Enjoy the week ahead.

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  24. Love and marriage...Thanks for dropping by to read my 140 Hope your week goes well

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  25. Sounds like love is in the air around here:) Great microfiction. I enjoyed it very much.

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  27. Peggy,
    It is a sweet picture and I can see them being so in love and he doesn't want to mess it up!
    Good 140!

    ~JEAN

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  28. Stevey Wonder! Along with a proposal, all in the same breath? Very nice take, Peggy. :)
    ..

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  29. Quite a few of us saw marriage for this couple! :)

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  30. Awww... this is so romantic. I thought I'd already commented, but I guess I missed this. I hope everything is going well on your end, Peg.

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  31. You set a lovely mood! Very nice. :)

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  33. Just checking in on you....too quiet for my tastes. :)

    Have a good weekend!

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